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Steed said, “I am going to tell her. I plan to tell her. But I am not ready.” Steed changed the subject. “So who is the woman in the camper that you just gave a briefcase to?”
“Some chick with a dick with whom I had some funny business. I may end up killing her.”
In horror Deven looked at Leroy. “Why on earth do you say shit like that? That macabre humor is creepy.”
Leroy took a drink of his beer and took some bites from his sandwich. “Who said I am joking? She is dangerous. And it is not like you didn’t kill her boyfriend. Don’t judge me.”
Steed said, “Wait. Fuck. You know about Dioson and Hannibal? And that woman is the girlfriend of Hannibal. Are you fucking kidding me?”
Hearthville Serial
Book 5 (Title Undecided):
A Paranormal Suspense Gangster Horror
By Charles Peters
Copyright 2020
All Rights Reserved
Chapter 5
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Dioson sat in his camper at the Hearthville Lake View Trailer Park. He had shifted his appearance to look like a woman. He kept his cock and balls, so unless someone looked at him naked they would think he was a woman. If they saw him naked they would think he was a transvestite. Under neither circumstance would they recognize him as Dioson Claws, or would they?
Dioson looked at the newspaper. “That damn Victor. Total assholes, making that son of a bitch into a hero. I want that vial corpse dead just like he ought to be dead.” Dioson folded the newspaper up into a roll and put a rubber band around it just like it was when he took it off of a neighbor’s stoop. He stood up and opened his door. He whirled the newspaper across his tiny camping spot and onto the porch of the neighboring trailer where he had borrowed the paper. He closed his door.
Dioson turned and walked over to the small counter. He poured himself another cup of coffee. He turned and admired himself in a mirror. “Damn Diane, woman, you are looking fine. I wonder how I would make out at a lesbian bar.”
There was a knock at Dioson’s door. Dioson peeped out to see Leroy standing there. Leroy had a brief case in his hand. Dioson opened the door.
Leroy said, “Sorry ma’am, I must have the wrong camper.”
Dioson said, “No. You dumb ass. It is me.”
Leroy said, “Sure. I knew that.” Leroy handed Dioson the briefcase. “Now that is all of the money that you will be getting. I want you to get out of the state and preferably out of the country.”
Dioson said, “I have some business I need to take care of first.”
“Yeah. Just make sure that it is not monkey business that will get mom and me in trouble. Stay away from Sabian. Stay away from Victor. Stay away from everyone.”
“Why Sabian?”
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“I do not want the two of you working up some new plans.”
Dioson smiled. “So Leroy, have you ever fucked a chick with a dick.”
“I am not interested.”
“Why?”
“I am just not interested.” Leroy turned to leave. But then he stopped. He turned back around. “If you cause me problems I will kill and cage you. Just because I look like a tamed, purring pussy, don’t underestimate me.”
“Oh. Tough man. I am so afraid.”
“You might not be afraid of me but you should be. You should also be afraid of my grandfather, Adolph.”
Dioson nodded. “Yeah. Okay. Point made. You little purring pussy.”
Leroy turned and walked to his car. He saw Steed sunning on the top of Steed’s trailer, a few lots down. Leroy let out a loud wolf whistle. Steed saw Leroy. His inclination was that he wanted to shake his fist at Leroy but instead he smiled.
Leroy called to him, “Yo, man, sexxxxxxy.”
Steed said, “If you got it, I say flaunt it. I’ve got some beer in a cooler if you want to come up and talk. Just talk.”
Leroy said, “Hell yeah. It is not my style to turn down some free beer.”
Dioson watched. “That Leroy. I think maybe I should be afraid of him.” Dioson walked back into his camper and closed his door.
***
Leroy walked up on Steed’s porch. He climbed up the ladder to the roof of the trailer. He looked at the garden Steed had on the top of his trailer. “Nice tomatoes.”
“Pick you a ripe one. They are good.”
Leroy did as Steed said. He then sat down at the picnic table. “Can I use the bread and the mayonnaise here on the picnic table and fix me a tomato sandwich?”
“Yeah. Sure.”
Deven walked up. He called up to Steed. “Can I join the two of you?”
Steed said, “Sure.”
Deven climbed the ladder to the roof. He looked at Leroy and Steed.
Steed said, “Pick you a tomato. Fix you a sandwich. Get you a beer from the cooler.”
Deven smiled. He went to work fixing himself a sandwich just as Leroy was doing.
Leroy asked, “So, Steed, have you talked to your father about the business he and Victor are helping to set up for my mom?”
Steed said, “No. No clue. Since I am working at the garage and for now not pulling my money out of my trust fund we tend to not talk business. So Victor is in business with my father?”
“I have no idea what Victor and your father’s relationship is. I basically went to Victor with my hands out to help my mom and Victor made your father part of the deal, which I was happy about. It worked out better than I could have imagined. Victor is a good man.”
Steed said, “I date his sister and he hates me. And by the way, he does not have a clue who I am and I would like to keep it that way. He does not know that my father is Arthur Ramsey.”
“Sure. You want Judy to love you for who you are and not the body count in the River that runs under the airport. I totally understand.”
Deven said, “I think you should tell Victor and Judy who you are. At some point the secret is going to totally blow up in your face.”
Steed said, “I am going to tell her. I plan to tell her. But I am not ready.” Steed changed the subject. “So who is the woman in the camper that you just gave a briefcase to?”
“Some chick with a dick with whom I had some funny business. I may end up killing her.”
In horror Deven looked at Leroy. “Why on earth do you say shit like that? That macabre humor is creepy.”
Leroy took a drink of his beer and took some bites from his sandwich. “Who said I am joking? She is dangerous. And it is not like you didn’t kill her boyfriend. Don’t judge me.”
Steed said, “Wait. Fuck. You know about Dioson and Hannibal? And that woman is the girlfriend of Hannibal. Are you fucking kidding me?”
Leroy said, “You really need to talk to your father. He will tell you some wild shit. But I am not telling you fuck.”
Steed grabbed his phone. He called his father. “Leroy is on the roof of my trailer with Deven and me. He knows about Dioson and Hannibal and he just gave a briefcase to a transvestite who he says is the girlfriend of Hannibal. What the fuck is going on?”
Arthur said, “Put Leroy on the phone with me?”
Leroy took the phone. “Hey Arthur.”
“What the fuck are you doing?”
“I am enjoying myself with Steed and Deven. I am drinking a beer and eating a tomato sandwich. It is really good. I love Purple Plate Mayonnaise.”
“You gave money to the girlfriend of Hannibal who is camping near my son.”
“I called her Hannibal’s girlfriend but it is actually Dioson.”
Arthur screamed, “Dioson is camping near my son.”
“Yeah, when I discovered that I didn’t much like it either. Plus he was getting too expensive. I don’t like throwing my grandfather’s money around. So you are assumption is wrong. I didn’t put money in the briefcase. I put a bomb in the briefcase.”
Steed and Deven looked at one another. They spoke at the same time. “He put a bomb in the briefcase.”
At the exact moment of Steed and Deven’s proclamation the bomb exploded with a loud boom. Steed, Deven, and Leroy watched fire and black smoke shoot up from the camper. Dioson crawled out through a window with shooting flames at his back. He fell from window and to the ground. He looked up at Leroy and the others watching him. He screamed to Leroy, “You son of a bitch. I will kill you.”
Leroy called back to him. “This pussy is going to keep purring. I suggest you leave me and the others the fuck alone. Did you really think putting your camper close to Steed’s trailer was a bright idea?”
Dioson screamed, “You son of a bitch, I hate you so fucking much. I have 3rd degree burns and it hurts.”
Leroy laughed. “Good. My plan worked.” Leroy whispered to Steed, “I actually wanted him dead.” Leroy screamed to Dioson, “Now I suggest you get the fuck out of here before the police arrive.”
Dioson looked around. He then vanished into thin air.
Deven said, “He just vanished. He actually vanished.”
Leroy smiled. “No. I am pretty sure he got up and walked to his car and drove away.”
Steed noticed that the car that had been parked near the camper was gone. “The car vanished also.”
Leroy spoke into the phone. “The bomb didn’t kill Dioson. Maybe, hopefully, he learned his lesson. But anyway, understand, I am watching out for your son.”
Arthur said, “I have no idea what to say.” Arthur hung up.
Leroy handed the phone back to Steed. “Man this was fun but I think I should run. I really do not want to talk to the law.”
Steed asked, “What should I tell the law?”
“Nothing. What is there to tell?”
Deven said, “Nothing.”
Leroy crawled down the ladder from the top of Steed’s trailer. He walked to his car and with a twirl opened his door and crawled inside. With a big, happy grin he cranked his car and drove off.
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“I know it is partly and maybe mostly because the eBooks were short but Erotic Domination of Planet Earth did not do crap.
I don’t really think anything I publish on Amazon will sell at this point. I just like this story and I figure once at 80,000 words I will publish the next eBook but I don’t really have hopes for it.”
To make money you have to pick the traffic up here. The story needs to be more edgy and steamy.
I know that is easier said than done though.
I don’t know.
If I don’t really shrink the animated gifs down I get an error when posting a comment.
I know. I am not sure why that is happening. Some error about a get statement or something like that. I am not sure if there is a setting I can change to stop the error. And it may happen if you post before image is finished uploading but I could be totally wrong on that.
I like Leroy. Lethal. 🙂
I am liking the story but you really need to sex it up.
Advice under consideration. 🙂
I like the story, but yeah, it probably does need to have a bit more sex. You could have made the chemistry between Dioson and Leroy a little more heated.
Leroy is attracted to Deven. Also he has just come off of being heart broken by Paulstir McCluskey and Misty Betrust.
Dioson is the kind of character who would have enemy sex but Leroy isn’t. On the one hand Leroy was using Paulstir and Misty but he fell in love with them.
When Dioson has sex it will be with someone who doesn’t know who he is nor know the potential danger. There is something planned.
I don’t really know how explicit I should get with the sex though. Erotica has kind of bit me in the ass and I don’t really want this story to become erotica.
That makes sense.
I understand.
I like this story and I would hate for you to drop it, but for you to stand a chance of making money you have got to get back to erotica.
I know it is partly and maybe mostly because the eBooks were short but Erotic Domination of Planet Earth did not do crap.
I don’t really think anything I publish on Amazon will sell at this point. I just like this story and I figure once at 80,000 words I will publish the next eBook but I don’t really have hopes for it.
Leroy and Dioson should definitely have had sex before Leroy leaves the bomb. And you should have had the bomb known to the reader and wondering when it was going to explode while Leroy and Dioson are fucking.
I guess. That is just not the way I wrote it. But I get the point. I appreciate everyone’s feedback. I do.
off subject.
Do you ever catch timmy_flex on CB?
the last show I caught he was putting chocolate in his hair and betting his girlfriend which one of them could handle a bigger dildo in the , you know. She said dildo hell, she would look for someone with a big real one.
He is a mess. Have you ever looked at his youtube channel. He doesn’t try to bowwow but it is kind of sad.